Friday, September 05, 2008

...travelling through the grief of hEaRt


She never made dramatic gestures
nor any solemn lectures;
my talks were with her potent eyes
nd so wasn't able to broach any lies

the adorable gift for me was her time,
to me it worth more than a mime ;
being with her I heard de music of chime
but now, de pain is worst than a dime

those were de days
I hate de night dreams;
but now,
I love them atleast to hav her gleams

When walking on the street sides
I search for her footsteps besides,
but once I fail to find her
it was her name dat I slur

wat she
made in my life was just jaunts
but it was,
her images dat always haunts

consolable is,
the pain when hit by a dart
but not,
my travel through de grief of heart

9 comments:

Anonymous said...

baaaduu....

pooja said...

nicely written i like the way it starts and ends...

Comfortably Numb said...

A nice flow to the poem. Was simple yet crisp.

And this was beautiful :)

consolable is,
the pain when hit by a dart
but not,
my travel through de grief of heart


Cheers!

Nidz said...

Nice!! keep it up. cheers
Btw i love i read Chatan Bhagat's book too. love them to the core.
Even Sheldon is good. Read a bok called Kite Runner Dont rem the Author m bad in remembering names :( Even m not a big time reader but if i find any book interesting i get engrossed. But m a slow reader.

Anonymous said...

dei machan..,

nee dhana da adhu !!! i cnt believe........nyways...gr8888888 kavidhai..!!hatsss offf..

Don't worry ...Always be positive.... take things litely!!! part of lif machi....!!!Nevr bother abt anything...jus get along wid them...things ll be back to normal.!

Casey said...

@charan.. thanx macha!!

yea sure da, I hope things will b normal quite soon... :)

Anonymous said...

Ne kadhalikaravala vida unna kadhalikaravala ne kalyana panikita un vazhkai nalla irukum... Think!!

Vengu said...

@Superstar: Pthoo

Casey said...

@Vengu: hehe ;)

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